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lesteradams
Quiet Desperation episode 17
RiffRaff
to start. i really liked the original (pre-QD) short vids.

but robby, these QD videos (especially this one) are like a huge inside joke.

honestly, what are you going for?

are you trying to shop this? or is this just for fun?


peteywheatstraw
Did I walk past you dopes filming at New Alliance over the weekend?
Satan
Unfunny, and believe Me as the Master of Unfunny, I know unfunny. This reeks of it.
goat
Fuckin' hilarious!
mhaverty
I thought this one was one of the better ones.
Satan
Less unfunny than the others, yes.
Johnny Angel
I really appreciate all the hard work that goes into these and they are decently shot and edited.

But if they don't make me laugh or even smile......one of my closest friends in the area has become a principal in these and I really wanna like 'em for her sake. I'm trying, Rob, I really am--but write some actual funny bits, dude, you can do it.

I hope. The general improv just isn't happening.
MrCheese
Good stuff.

Method acting?

I think some of these things are things I can relate to from my past: the somewhat crazy people at the rehearsal studio (in my case, the Music Complex), I got levitationally stoned in that Medford/Wincheaster Revolutionary War lookout when I was 19, and of course, Santa's Village...which I never did tripping but my friends and I always talked about going to Riverside (now Six Flags) tripping...

keep 'em coming.
RiffRaff
so Robby is FrankD?
Danny Vermin
QUOTE(Johnny Angel @ Feb 4 2010, 03:47 PM) *

they are decently shot and edited.

I'm not going to even bother with commenting on the acting/script shit. Needless to say it's fucking terrible pointless stupidity.

But I have to ask johnny, are you blind, or is it just that your ADD gels with the editing in these? What a fucking mess. everything runs into/over one another. It's like it was edited on the 5th day of a coke/meth bender by someone who wanted to see exactly how close he could cut dialog togeher before it becomes one giant stream of consciousness faucet of bad middle school level humor.

It's like giving Rainman access to Protools and a large jar of chocolate covered coffee beans.
DanPM
is this thread a rerun?
MrCheese
QUOTE(Danny Vermin @ Feb 4 2010, 04:41 PM) *

I'm not going to even bother with commenting on the acting/script shit. Needless to say it's fucking terrible pointless stupidity.

But I have to ask johnny, are you blind, or is it just that your ADD gels with the editing in these? What a fucking mess. everything runs into/over one another. It's like it was edited on the 5th day of a coke/meth bender by someone who wanted to see exactly how close he could cut dialog togeher before it becomes one giant stream of consciousness faucet of bad middle school level humor.

It's like giving Rainman access to Protools and a large jar of chocolate covered coffee beans.


I bet you think "Everybody Loves Raymond" is hilarious.


Maybe Robby should use a laugh track so you'll like it more.
JoeO
I found the homer simpleton beard make up very distracting but the Black guy reminded me of Jackson in Pulp so on balance good job

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Danny Vermin
QUOTE(MrCheese @ Feb 4 2010, 04:43 PM) *

I bet you think "Everybody Loves Raymond" is hilarious.
Maybe Robby should use a laugh track so you'll like it more.

So you're saying that the dialog isn't muffled and cut so close together that it makes no sense?

This isn't a matter of like or dislike. It's poorly edited. no space between the sentences.

Itslikeitseditedlikethissoyouhavetoreallyconcentratewickedfuckinghardjusttoeekou
tthreewordsthatformacogentsentence.

It's painfully bad editing.
Dr. Moose
QUOTE(MrCheese @ Feb 4 2010, 04:43 PM) *

I bet you think "Everybody Loves Raymond" is hilarious.
Maybe Robby should use a laugh track so you'll like it more.


Everyone loves Everyone Loves Raymond.....
JoeO
QUOTE(Dr. Moose @ Feb 4 2010, 04:51 PM) *

Everyone loves Vermin.....

FIxed
Johnny Angel
QUOTE(Danny Vermin @ Feb 4 2010, 05:41 PM) *

I'm not going to even bother with commenting on the acting/script shit. Needless to say it's fucking terrible pointless stupidity.

But I have to ask johnny, are you blind, or is it just that your ADD gels with the editing in these? What a fucking mess. everything runs into/over one another. It's like it was edited on the 5th day of a coke/meth bender by someone who wanted to see exactly how close he could cut dialog togeher before it becomes one giant stream of consciousness faucet of bad middle school level humor.

It's like giving Rainman access to Protools and a large jar of chocolate covered coffee beans.


They're "shorts".

They're supposed to be edited tightly.

That the dialogue isn't very good and there are a lot of slack spaces (because it is improvised) there means it gets sewn together in the fashion it is.

Would you prefer endless pregnant pauses and lots of "err's","uhmm's" and "ya know's", Francis Ford Crapola?
Danny Vermin
QUOTE(Johnny Angel @ Feb 4 2010, 04:59 PM) *

They're "shorts".

They're supposed to be edited tightly.

That the dialogue isn't very good and there are a lot of slack spaces (because it is improvised) there means it gets sewn together in the fashion it is.

Would you prefer endless pregnant pauses and lots of "err's","uhmm's" and "ya know's", Francis Ford Crapola?

I look at it this way.

Not that I'm comparing them on any sort of artistic or talent level, but this kind of psuedo-scriptless notreallyimprov situational comedy is like a homeless person's version of what Christopher Guest has done with Spinal Tap/Best In Show/Waiting for Guffman.

I LOVE that kind of stuff. But the thing that makes them laugh out loud funny is EXACTLY the dead air space. The uncomfortable silence after someone utters an uncomfortable truth about their character. the pause while waiting for a reaction.

This, on the other hand, leaves no space in between, and is really nothing more than a haphazardly slapped together collection of bad stereotypes that stopped being funny sometime around junior year of high school.

Johnny Angel
QUOTE(Danny Vermin @ Feb 4 2010, 06:06 PM) *



This, on the other hand, leaves no space in between, and is really nothing more than a haphazardly slapped together collection of bad stereotypes that stopped being funny sometime around junior year of high school.


Exactly--hammer on nail.

But if it were slower, there'd be more of it--you'd want 12 minutes of this as opposed to six?

Mister Shhh
How's YOUR comedy video short doing?
DanPM
when is season 2?
Danny Vermin
QUOTE(Johnny Angel @ Feb 4 2010, 05:13 PM) *

Exactly--hammer on nail.

But if it were slower, there'd be more of it--you'd want 12 minutes of this as opposed to six?

Slower.

and less "hey lets take drugs man!" "Oh shit it's that angry black guy who swears alot!"
coughlin
QUOTE(MrCheese @ Feb 4 2010, 05:43 PM) *

I bet you think "Everybody Loves Raymond" is hilarious.
Maybe Robby should use a laugh track so you'll like it more.

well, he did enjoy opie & anthony.
Jeff Bruisers
I know that everyone has a different sense of humor and some of you guys don't get this stuff but I still think it's pretty fucking funny shit.
Flipper

Still not remotely funny.

Robbyroadsteamer
Hehehe, Awwwww shucks "same five angry people who post on every Quiet Desperation episode and watch every episode religiously".... I'm sorry this one didn't surprise ya. Guess we won't sit together for lunch. Thanks for all the support on the new episode though. Alot of people are saying the bestest one yet so check it out!!!!
Mister Shhh
Robbie you over act when you're talking to the camera. Try to be more natural.
Jeff Bruisers
Since you never made it to Santa's Village how about a long weekend there plus Six Gun City and the Alpine Slide?
MrCheese
QUOTE(Jeff Bruisers @ Feb 5 2010, 12:28 PM) *

Since you never made it to Santa's Village how about a long weekend there plus Six Gun City and the Alpine Slide?


Or Strory Land or Clark's Trading Post. Or maybe the Polar Caves! On mescaline, if you can still find that around.
Jeff Bruisers
QUOTE(MrCheese @ Feb 5 2010, 01:33 PM) *

Or Strory Land or Clark's Trading Post. Or maybe the Polar Caves! On mescaline, if you can still find that around.


...and stay at the Mount Washington hotel during a raging snowstorm.
JoeO
end up at the quincy quarry & find a dead kid like stand by me


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sixpinelbow
i still don't understand why it is called quiet desperation

i also still can't get much further than 1:54 in to it before turning it off but that's neither here nor there.
JoeO
QUOTE(Jeff Bruisers @ Feb 5 2010, 12:41 PM) *

...and stay at the Mount Washington hotel during a raging snowstorm.

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All work and no play makes robbie a dull boy
Satan
QUOTE(Jeff Bruisers @ Feb 4 2010, 06:33 PM) *

I know that everyone has a different sense of humor and some of you guys don't get this stuff but I still think it's pretty fucking funny shit.

You going to start a fight with anyone who disagrees?
Johnny Angel
QUOTE(sixpinelbow @ Feb 5 2010, 01:51 PM) *

i still don't understand why it is called quiet desperation

i also still can't get much further than 1:54 in to it before turning it off but that's neither here nor there.


Mrs. Angel made it to 0:34.

You're a trooper, kid!
Jeff Bruisers
QUOTE(Johnny Angel @ Feb 5 2010, 04:13 PM) *

Mrs. Angel made it to 0:34.

You're a trooper, kid!


...yeah, "Mrs Angel" was in a hurry and had no time to watch that episode as she was too busy counting her various and sundry blessings. laughing.gif
Johnny Angel
QUOTE(Jeff Bruisers @ Feb 5 2010, 04:16 PM) *

...yeah, "Mrs Angel" was in a hurry and had no time to watch that episode as she was too busy counting her various and sundry blessings. laughing.gif


Don't you have a mic to sit on somewhere, Gaylord?
sixpinelbow
so nobody has any idea why they call it that either
Jeff Bruisers
QUOTE(Johnny Angel @ Feb 5 2010, 04:18 PM) *

Don't you have a mic to sit on somewhere, Gaylord?


"Gaylord"?!? laughing.gif I haven't heard that since Johnny King hit Yvonne Tirone in the back of the thigh with a whiffle ball bat up the street in '76

laughing.gif bleh.gif
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Johnny Angel
QUOTE(sixpinelbow @ Feb 5 2010, 04:20 PM) *

so nobody has any idea why they call it that either


I think it narrowly beat out "Six Minutes Of Unbearable Tedium Delivered By Townie Numbskulls" by a hair.
Stewmeat
Shit's funny, come aaahhhhnnnn! Was at NA recording and wanted to photobomb the shoot...maybe next time.
Jeff Bruisers
The title sounds to me like a literary, musical and cultural reference all wrapped up into one.

Take the "Quiet desperation..." of Pink Floyd's ode to British resiliancy in the face of stifling sameness coupled with Orwell's "Keep the Aspidistra Flying", illustrating the point in more detail, if more desolate and hopeless.

Roadsteamer follows in the well worn but worthy footsteps of Gilmour, Orwell and others who have painted with words and music the picture that Roadsteamer so masterfully captures in ones and zeros.
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Danny Vermin
QUOTE(Johnny Angel @ Feb 5 2010, 03:13 PM) *

Mrs. Angel made it to 0:34.

You're a trooper, kid!

Wait a minute, weren't you playing contrarian the last few episodes and telling him how much you liked it?

laughing.gif
Satan
QUOTE(Jeff Bruisers @ Feb 5 2010, 03:37 PM) *

The title sounds to me like a literary, musical and cultural reference all wrapped up into one.

Take the "Quiet desperation..." of Pink Floyd's ode to British resiliancy in the face of stifling sameness coupled with Orwell's "Keep the Aspidistra Flying", illustrating the point in more detail, if more desolate and hopeless.

Roadsteamer follows in the well worn but worthy footsteps of Gilmour, Orwell and others who have painted with words ad music the picture that Roadsteamer so masterfully captures in ones and zeros.

Oh just fellate him already.
Johnny Angel
QUOTE(Danny Vermin @ Feb 5 2010, 04:39 PM) *

Wait a minute, weren't you playing contrarian the last few episodes and telling him how much you liked it?

laughing.gif


The missus couldn't stand it. Mrs Angel and Johnny Angel being 2 different people, Danny.

I give him a "B+" for effort. It is shot nicely, the lighting is OK and the editing is pro enough.

But it isn't funny and after about a minute in, you realize it ain't gonna be. I never said I liked the thing, but it does have some merit.
Danny Vermin
QUOTE(Johnny Angel @ Feb 5 2010, 03:42 PM) *

The missus couldn't stand it. Mrs Angel and Johnny Angel being 2 different people, Danny.

could've fooled me.
Mike C
QUOTE(lesteradams @ Feb 4 2010, 03:11 AM) *

Everybody giving Rob advice doesn't have anything up that people care about it? Seems that way.

Everytime he does a video some like it, some hate it, he's getting views.

I don't find the critics funny but yawn.

Faggot pants.

Electric Larry
"Fireworks and fuckin' mushrooms."
robpotylo
But Mike I'm writing down everything they're saying and trying to make better videos from the notes. And I never yawn when they critique... Wide awake. That's the key.



>>>>>Everybody giving Rob advice doesn't have anything up that people care about it? Seems that way.

Everytime he does a video some like it, some hate it, he's getting views.

I don't find the critics funny but yawn.

Faggot pants.
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