Full Version: Dr Jeckyll and Mr Hyde by a young DanPM
It's possible that I'm slightly retarded
His medicine, eh.
J'ever see this?
"Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Drunk"
in:
http://www.goantiques.com/detail,national-...979,727943.html
J'ever see this?
"Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Drunk"
in:
http://www.goantiques.com/detail,national-...979,727943.html
So 'to' and 'ounce' get corrected....personalitys is fine though...
My favorite is "layer" instead of "lawyer"
QUOTE(Dook of Oil @ May 10 2008, 06:31 PM) 
So 'to' and 'ounce' get corrected....personalitys is fine though...
& 1st / 2nd sentence break
for the cover I ripped the cover off of the paperback and glued it to a piece of construction paper.
"he was making a drug"
"he told his brother to get the drug"
"opinion..."
"he told his brother to get the drug"
"opinion..."
No need to get too wordy on the opinion
With abilites on that level I assume you would have grown up to write for The Noise.
The opinion freakin' rules!QUOTE(Defbil @ May 12 2008, 03:37 PM)
The opinion freakin' rules!it's the new "shit sandwich"
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